Points
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Criteria
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Analysis (15%)
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14–15 (Excellent)
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Author directly addresses the questions of the assignment. Essay contains a clear argument-—i.e., lets the reader know exactly what the author is trying to communicate.
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12–13 (Good)
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Author competently addresses the questions of the assignment. An argument is present, but the reader must reconstruct it from the text.
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10–11 (Needs Improvement)
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Author attempts to address the questions of the assignment. Author attempts, but fails, to make an argument (e.g., starts with a rhetorical question or anecdote that is never put into context).
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0–9 (Unacceptable)
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Essay does not address the questions of the assignment. No attempt is made to articulate an argument.
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Content/Evidence (20%)
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18–20 (Excellent)
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Provides compelling and accurate supporting evidence that convinces reader to accept main argument. The importance/relevance of all pieces of evidence is clearly stated. There are no gaps in reasoning—i.e., the reader does not need to assume anything or do additional research to accept main argument.
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16–17 (Good)
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Provides necessary supporting evidence to convince reader of most aspects of the main argument but not all. The importance/ relevance of some evidence presented may not be totally clear. Reader must make a few mental leaps or do some additional research to fully accept all aspects of main argument.
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13–15 (Needs Improvement)
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Insufficient evidence is provided to support author’s argument, or evidence is incomplete, factually incorrect, or oversimplified.
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0–12 (Unacceptable)
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Either no evidence is provided, or there are numerous factual mistakes, omissions or oversimplifications.
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Professional Development & Reflection (15%)
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14–15 (Excellent)
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The essay includes original, thoughtful reasons why the author wants to study the history of mathematics. These reasons also indicate the author's sophistication in thought and expression has deepened throughout the semester. The author presents a professional demeanor and shows interest and enthusiasm for the historical profession.
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12–13 (Good)
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The essay includes thoughtful reasons why the author wants to study the history of mathematics but may lack originality. There are indications of growth in the author's sophistication in thought and expression, but at least one conceptual breakthrough is yet to be achieved. The author shows interest and enthusiasm for the historical profession and is developing a professional demeanor.
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10–11 (Needs Improvement)
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The essay is perfunctory in indicating the reasons why the author wants to study the history of mathematics. The author shows interest and enthusiasm for the historical profession. The complexities of historical practice are acknowledged but not resolved.
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0–9 (Unacceptable)
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The complexities of historical practice are misconstrued or ignored. The author's interest in the history of mathematics is not apparent.
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Organization (10%)
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9–10 (Excellent)
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Thesis statement for entire essay is contained within first paragraph of paper, and all paragraphs have obvious topic sentences. Transitions between paragraphs make it very easy to follow the argument. Underlying logic of claims is apparent and sound. The reader understands the author's thinking throughout the paper.
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8 (Good)
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Thesis statement for entire essay is contained within first paragraph of paper, and all paragraphs contain topic sentences. Transitions between paragraphs are generally clear. Underlying logic of claims is sound, but reader may have to stop once to discern the author's thinking.
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6–7 (Needs Improvement)
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Thesis and topic sentences do not stand out to the reader. Paragraphs change topic abruptly. Underlying logic is difficult to follow. Reader has to read essay twice to understand it.
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0–5 (Unacceptable)
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There is no hierarchy among the sentences of the paper. It is impossible to follow the argument because the underlying logic is random or contradictory. There seem to be many arguments, and it is completely unclear which is the main one.
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Clarity and Style (15%)
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14–15 (Excellent)
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Ideas expressed in active voice and clear, fluent sentences. All words are chosen for their precise meanings. All new or unusual terms are well-defined. Key concepts and theories are accurately and completely explained. No rhetorical questions or slang.
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12–13 (Good)
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Ideas usually expressed in active voice and clear sentences. Most words are chosen for their precise meanings. Most new or unusual terms are well-defined. Key concepts and theories are explained. No rhetorical questions or slang.
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10–11 (Needs Improvement)
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A few sentences are not clearly written. Passive voice is prevalent. Words are not chosen for their precise meanings. New or unusual terms are not well-defined. Key concepts and theories are not explained. Paper has several rhetorical questions or uses of slang.
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0–9 (Unacceptable)
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Prevalent problems with clarity. Essay uses words that do not fit the context at all. Phrasings are awkward and incoherent. Style reflects the author's stream-of-consciousness or conversational tone.
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Mechanics (15%)
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14–15 (Excellent)
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Sentence structure, grammar, and expression are excellent; absolutely no run-on sentences or subject/verb disagreements. Correct use of punctuation. Minimal to no spelling errors.
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12–13 (Good)
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Sentence structure, grammar, and expression are strong despite occasional lapses. Punctuation is often used correctly. Some (minor) spelling errors; may have one run-on sentence, sentence fragment, or subject/verb disagreement.
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10–11 (Needs Improvement)
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Some problems in sentence structure, grammar, and expression, as well as errors in punctuation and spelling. The mistakes do not intrude on the reader's ability to understand the essay. May have several run-on sentences or fragments.
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0–9 (Unacceptable)
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Prevalent problems in sentence structure, grammar, and expression that interrupt the reader's concentration. Frequent (in nearly every sentence) major errors in punctuation and spelling. May have many run-on sentences, fragments, and subject/verb disagreements.
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Citations & Formatting (10%)
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9–10 (Excellent)
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Specifed citation style (e.g., Chicago, MLA, APA) used consistently in footnotes and in bibliography; direct quotations, paraphrases, and summaries are all cited; paper meets any specified formatting requirements (e.g., for title, student name, font size, spacing, margins, page numbers, etc.); paper within the required length range.
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8 (Good)
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Specifed citation style (e.g., Chicago, MLA, APA) attempted in footnotes and in bibliography with a few minor inconsistencies between citations; direct quotations are all cited but author may have failed to cite 1 or 2 paraphrases or summaries; a few errors in any specified formatting requirements (title, student name, font size, spacing, margins, page numbers, etc.); paper within 10% of the required length range.
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6–7 (Needs Improvement)
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Specified citation style (e.g., Chicago, MLA, APA) attempted in footnotes and in bibliography with some substantial inconsistencies between citations; citations provided only for direct quotations; several errors in any specified formatting requirements (title, student name, font size, spacing, margins, page numbers, etc.); paper within 20% of the required length range.
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0–5 (Unacceptable)
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Frequent errors in specified citation style (e.g., Chicago, MLA, APA) that impede the reader's ability to identify and locate the sources used; multiple failures to follow any specified formatting guidelines; paper within 30% of the required length range.
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